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"Mom," Bruce began, "we
left for your anniversary trip on the fifteenth of July. After three days of
glorious weather and site seeing, we lost all power on the boat. Our radio was
dead, the engine would not power on. Dad decided the best thing to do was just
float and see where the tide would take us. He figured that we would be missed
as soon as the boat didn't return and that a search party would be sent out
after us. I think what he didn't consider is that we had chartered the boat for
a month and that still left twenty eight days before we would be missed.
“We set out fishing lines and figured we
could eat from the ocean. It worked for a short while, but then we ran out of
water. Dad and I tried to catch water from the condensation; we even tried to
boil sea water, but it just wasn't enough. By the tenth day adrift we were
completely desperate, no water, no food, no more matches and then the storm
hit.
“The skies darkened to a black like I have
never seen. The seas became enraged and tossed us from side to side. When the
waves were higher than us, Dad said we should all take shelter in the cabin.
Adriana went all the way to the front of boat and hunkered down in the beds
under the bow. You and Dad somehow or another managed to get into the bunks
near the back of the cabins and secure yourselves in. I lay down in the area
under the table and held on for dear life.
“That storm seemed to take days to clear.
When the winds and sea finally abated I got up and opened the hatch to see what
kind of damage we had sustained. The deck of the boat looked like a hurricane
had blown through. There was seaweed, fish and other debris from the ocean
strewn across the bow. I had expected all of you to join me on deck, but that
was not to be the case.
“I went back into the cabin, first looking for Adriana. I found
her curled up near the bow of the ship. I thought she was sleeping, but she was
dead. She had been weak and dehydrated prior to the storm and I guess her body
just couldn’t handle all the abuse of rolling around.
“When I found you and Dad I half-expected you to be dead because
you had been as weak as Adriana; but what I discovered couldn’t have been
farther from the truth. Dad had wrapped himself around you so his body took the
brunt of the tumbling. He was gone, but you were still breathing even though
you were unconscious.
“I went back up on deck and found that the storm had left great
deposits of water. I managed to get a small fire going on the stove in the
cabin and cooked one of the fish that was on the deck. I tried to get you to
eat, but you wouldn’t wake up. I managed to get some water into you and over
the next several days I repeated this activity. Your eyes began to flutter one
morning and you woke up. At that time you know what was going on.
“I spotted land the next day and we took cushions for floatation
devices and managed to get to shore. When we landed you were again unconscious.
I built us this shelter and have done a little exploring during the day. But
now that you are awake I can take long trips and see what else there is here.”
“What day is it?” Nicole asked, “And where is your father?”
“Mom, did you not just hear me tell you where he was?”
“No, I heard you say we all went for a boat ride and now we are on
an island.”
Bruce put his head in his hands and wanted to weep; but he knew
this was not the time to get emotional. He slowly repeated the story again from
start to finish. When he was done Nicole
said, “So your Dad and sister are gone?”
“Yes, Mom, they are.”
“And we are on an island somewhere?”
“Yes, Mom, we are.”
“When is the search party coming?” Nicole asked.
Bruce shook his head and replied, “I’m not sure if there is going
to be a search party. I have no idea what date it is; where we are or if we
could even be spotted.”
“So what are you going to do?”
“Find us a way home!”
Bruce really has his work cut out for him! I hope he's strong enough to get he and his mom through this.
ReplyDeleteFun, Brenda....and the saga continues. I'm starting a short story this week on Tuesdays. It's a great writing challenge to keep the story going. This one recaps where they are and what is happening. Can't wait to see how Bruce is going to get them home!
ReplyDeleteI liked how this chapter brought us up to date along with Bruce's mother. Her struggle is just beginning, as the reality of all that has occurred and been lost will begin to register with her. Bruce has to be the strong one if they are going to survive, and I suspect he is up to the task. Great episode, Brenda! :-)
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